Friday, 2 October 2015

Interim Feedback - Studio Brief 01 - OUGD504

Today I had my final bit of feedback for the completion of my leaflet.

The questions I had were:

1. Is there any other way the image in the centre of the pentagons can go without it looking odd?



This question was answered by a couple of other peers and solidified by Simon. They all suggested that I keep the designs consistent and have just a section of the pentagon covered in imagery and keep the copy separate. So I have implemented this into the final outcome as I think it has improved it vastly:




2. What could be put onto the other side of the folds, as I have not got any idea as to why I could do to fill the white space effectively.

In reply to this, a couple of people said that they would like to see the images for each step on the reverse side of the folds. Along with the number of the step accompanying the image. Giving you a better idea of how to open/close it:


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